Today, I want to talk about "senryuu"川柳(せんりゅう). Senryuu is a short poem.
It consists of 3 lines with 17 (5-7-5) or more/fewer morae.
Example from wikipedia,
- どろぼうを
- とらえてみれば
- わがこなり
- The robber,
- when I catch,
- my own son
The subject of senryuu is based on human nature, usually ironic or satirical.
(Credit: さとう先生のブローグです http://nikonikonihongo.blogspot.com/2013/03/blog-post_6523.html#comment-form)
I want to compose one as well. So did I compose.
おはようを Good
Morning
はなしていると We are saying it and
ハヤクする Saying it fast
さんぽしてる We are walking
ハヤクしている Walking fast
おはようを Good
morning
はなしてる We are saying good morning
あるくとはなす We are walking and saying
とてもハヤク really
fast
This is inspired by people who have to rush to class in the morning or during the 10 minute class-change time. They walk pass someone they know and say hi to them, but they just keep walking and do not talk to each other any more than that. That greeting can be somewhat regarded as shallow and meaningless. Also, I used katakana in はやく meaning "fast" (adv) to emphasize the word. I'm not sure whether I did it right, but I'm really like it anyway.
じゃあ、 このせんりゅうは どうですか。 みなさんは 好きですか。
じゃ、またした。