せんりゅう short poem / Katakana Appreciation

みなさん、

Today, I want to talk about "senryuu"川柳（せんりゅう）. Senryuu is a short poem.

It consists of 3 lines with 17 (5-7-5) or more/fewer morae.
Example from wikipedia,

どろぼうを

とらえてみれば

わがこなり

The robber,

when I catch,

my own son

The subject of senryuu is based on human nature, usually ironic or satirical.
(Credit: さとう先生のブローグです　http://nikonikonihongo.blogspot.com/2013/03/blog-post_6523.html#comment-form)

I want to compose one as well. So did I compose.

おはようを                                        Good Morning           

はなしていると                                We are saying it and

ハヤクする                                        Saying it fast

さんぽしてる                                    We are walking

ハヤクしている                                Walking fast

おはようを                                        Good morning

はなしてる                                        We are saying good morning

あるくとはなす                                We are walking and saying

とてもハヤク                                    really fast

This is inspired by people who have to rush to class in the morning or during the 10 minute class-change time. They walk pass someone they know and say hi to them, but they just keep walking and do not talk to each other any more than that. That greeting can be somewhat regarded as shallow and meaningless.  Also, I used katakana in はやく meaning "fast" (adv) to emphasize the word. I'm not sure whether I did it right, but I'm really like it anyway.

じゃあ、　このせんりゅうは　どうですか。　みなさんは　好きですか。
じゃ、またした。